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浙江省蒼南縣劉欣凝指導(dǎo)教師：蔡潔　　Therearefivepeopleinmyfamily.Myfather,mymother,mygrandmother,mysisterandme.　　Myfatheris39yearsold.Heisadoctor.Helikesplayingfootball

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浙江省蒼南縣    劉欣凝

指導(dǎo)教師：蔡潔

　　There are five people in my family.My father,my mother,my grandmother ,my sister and me.

　　My father is 39 years old.He is a doctor .He likes playing football.

　　My mother is younger and shorter than my father.She has curly hair and big eyes.She likes going shopping.She is a nurse.My parents work at the same hospital.

　　My grandmother is very very old.Her hair is white.She is a farmer,so she is very strong.She likes playing sports after dinner.

　　My sister is six years old.She is so cute.

　　I’m seven years older than her.I like reading books.My favourite book is Charlie and the Chocolate Factory. I often go to the library after school with my classmates.At school,I study very hard.

　　I love my family.I am happy every day.

　　教師評(píng)語(yǔ)：小作者用質(zhì)樸的語(yǔ)言介紹了自己的家庭。字里行間透露出作者對(duì)家庭的愛(ài)。文章語(yǔ)言淺顯、易懂。因?yàn)槭敲鑼?xiě)家庭，內(nèi)容是客觀存在的，所以本文在時(shí)態(tài)上用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

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